
By the same author as Grand Line 3.5
27th Apr 2016, 12:37 AM
This is spot on. I can't wait to see how you handle the rest of this arc |
27th Apr 2016, 1:18 AM
Don't change a thing. There is something to be said for brevity. I honestly got chills reading this page. That last line of GM works perfectly to show the tension even around the game table at this moment. |
27th Apr 2016, 1:29 AM"Aaarrgghh!"
Damn youuu. I've had 'The Very Very Very Strongest' running through my head for weeks, once I realised this part was coming up. |
27th Apr 2016, 2:43 AM
I always considered this the best part of one piece. OP has had a lot of feels moments.. but Arlong park.. especially this scene. Just wow. Nothing quite got me as well as this did. |
27th Apr 2016, 3:35 AM
What about Robin/CP9 arc? That was at least on par with this scene. Especially the flag scene and Robin breaking down. |
27th Apr 2016, 3:53 AM
The Robin/CP9 arc is spectacular in a lot of ways... but lets not beat around the bush here, it's basically Nami's betrayal with more conspiracy and world-building, the emotional through line is beat for beat identical. X is forcefully reminded of her past, flees the Strawhats with the enemy, brokers a deal, is betrayed, tries to refuse help but ultimately asks for it, doesn't do anything combative for the rest of the arc. |
27th Apr 2016, 7:58 AM"'Nothing combative'"
I mean, if you count snapping a guy's neck and back simultaneously 'non-combative', then sure... |
10th Nov 2017, 8:03 PM
Yes it was a bit of a scaled up version of this one, but the scene with the whole creww standing on the tower was kind of like "this scene, but with even better presentation." |
27th Apr 2016, 1:02 PM
For me it was always Usopp and the Going Merry- that was the arc that was the most heart-wrenching, the most inspiring in some ways. |
10th Nov 2017, 8:11 PM
Merry. |
13th Jul 2021, 4:29 PM
Gotta agree about Brook. The emotions in thriller bark is too often overlooked according to me. And Chopper in Drum Island, too. |
27th Apr 2016, 3:34 AM
I was worried about this scene, but you handled it perfectly. Can't wait for what happens in the next strip. |
27th Apr 2016, 9:02 AM
Good work man, good work. |
10th Nov 2017, 8:13 PM
feel weird to just read Raxon making a sincère observation like this, whithout saying anything weird. |
DragonTrainer
26th Apr 2016, 12:56 AM
I wanted to add more text to better portray that this was a table-top RPG, but... >_>
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